Tuesday, July 12, 2011

Maiden

Seek, between the trees,
The moment is so perfect,
Escape between the willow saplings
A maiden says hello to me
Her eyes yellow
Her lips curved up
In a smile
That makes me gasp
And I realized why,
I had gone away:
To find the maiden
Between the trees.

2 comments:

  1. I like this. I can see her there - slim, ethereal. The yellow eyes make me think she is other than human - a dryad amidst the willow?
    Its me - JDR

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  2. thanks! :D Your my FIFTH comment! thanks!

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